Recently, I had an email asking for advice on becoming a published
author, so I thought I’d lay out my writing history here. There are two parts: today’s post is about writing and part two is about self-publishing.
In the beginning there was hockey.
It all started around the time of the 2010 Olympic selection for
Team Canada. In fact, I can remember the exact moment I got inspired. I was
sitting on the couch with my friend, Daisy, and we looked up at the TV and
said, “Who’s that?” That turned out to be Jonathan Toews, who
has both the boyish good looks and on-ice determination that are so appealing
to hockey fans. Well, to Daisy and me anyway. And then he turned out to be from
Winnipeg, which is where Mr. X, the man in my life, is also from. This gave me
the excuse while watching games to point him out, “Hey sweetie, that guy’s from
Winnipeg too!” As long as you don’t drool while speaking, this method will
effectively deflect all attention away from your hockey crush. Sadly, I do
drool.
I love hockey and I love reading, and I wondered why those
pastimes could not be combined. So I went in search of hockey romances. I read
a few paperbacks from the library, but to be honest I found them to be fairly
lame. Either the writer had no clue about hockey (they’re hockey pants, not
hockey shorts!) or the stories themselves were too predictable. But then one
day, I was reading a hockey blog for women, and I clicked on the profile of one
of the commenters who looked slightly familiar. She followed a number of other
blogs, which all seemed to be about hockey, so I clicked on one.
Whoosh, talk about falling down a rabbit hole! Suddenly I was
whisked into a world where there were serial stories about hockey players. I
had certain preconceptions about fanfic, and all of them were negative. But
although many of the stories turned out to be lame and occasionally laughable, (it’s not possible to have intercourse for five hours, especially if you’re
Dave Bolland) a number of them were pretty darn good. However, most of them
were about Sidney Crosby, who doesn’t really do anything for me. I wondered why
nobody was writing about the player I wanted to read about, and I figured I’d
have to do it myself. At the time, before the Blackhawks won their first
Stanley Cup, there was only one about young Captain Serious. Now there are
zillions.
Creative writing was already something I enjoyed. As an
oversensitive teenager, I journaled my every boring thought and emotion. Then,
as an English major at university, I was used to reading and critiquing three
books a week. However, after that, most of my writing was restricted to (yawn)
business writing. But now I had the writing bug and some new inspiration. I got
encouragement and advice from one very kind author, and I started my own
serial. She told me that optimally I should post an update every day, which I
did. Looking back, I think I must have been insane, but my chapters were pretty
short at the beginning. And after 170 posts, I wrapped up my first story. Yup,
even from the beginning, I wrote long books.
At first, nobody, except my mentor and my friend, were reading. I
begged Daisy to leave comments so I’d look legit. But slowly the blog
readership grew, and by the end, I was getting about 200 hits a day and a ton
of enthusiastic feedback. You know your blog is popular when it gets ripped off
by content scrapers. I wrote two more long serials, and two short stories. All
the time my readers were so encouraging, telling me how much they liked my
writing and getting emotionally involved with my stories. My big highlight was
when someone told me the post made her cry. In my stories, I like to have a bit
of everything: laughter, sexual tension, dramatic tension, and tears. Just the
way life is.
I have to say that serial writing was the best apprenticeship that
I could have had for becoming an author. I had to produce chapters to a
deadline and I had to plan everything out ahead of time. 99% of the comments
were positive, because c’mon, who is going to criticize something that’s free?
But I could still see if readers didn’t like a post, because I would get fewer
comments. And comments for blogger are like crack for Rob Ford: completely
addictive. I’m always encouraging authors who are starting out to try serial
writing, and now it’s even easier with Wattpad. You get to see what appeals to
readers, and you get to work on a deadline, even if it’s self-imposed. But the
more frequently you post, the more readers you get. In addition, while fanfic
does get a bad rap, it has the advantage of having a built-in audience. I did
debate whether to “come out” as a fanfic author, but I’ve since found out that
a lot of hockey romance novels began as fanfic. So, why not be upfront about it?
Okay, there I was, sitting with a ton of finished books. What to do?
Well, I think you know already. Tune in for my next post on how I began
e-publishing.
Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed reading how you got into writing fanfic. Before I started writing hockey fanfic a couple years ago, I hadn't written anything like that since many years ago when I wrote a short Stephanie Plum story. I actually looked at that recently because someone asked for it and I realized that I had come a long way as an writer since then! I'm sure that it's the same for you, that you read your early efforts and see the difference.
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to reading about your self publishing experiences next!
Which hockey romance authors started with writing fanfic
I love Stephanie Plum books too! And now that I'm editing my first book, I can see how much I've developed as a writer, and I'm excited to have a chance to rewrite them and strengthen them. Once you change from a "real" character, you get a chance to structure the story in a more dramatic way.
ReplyDeleteYup, my self-publishing advice post will be on January 21st.
This is really great, Mel! The birth of a hockey writer; how interesting to get a peek into how you started. Ah, the good ole days.
ReplyDeleteReally, we should be thanking Mr. Toews (the many of many grumpy faces) for being the catalyst to get you back into creative writing, and writing about hockey now!
Thanks, Jay! Sadly, I no longer find him as inspiring. But there's a new Olympics now, so new chances to get inspired.
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